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It's here!!!!

I love the comedy in this.

I enjoyed the ending thanks monchi :D

Mabuhay!

route still uner  wurk i think

What

"route still under work i think" ie the update is still being worked on

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We're at that time of month where we either get a new update or get concerned about Monchi's mental health

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or another hiatus

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He has been trying his best to make the game more exquisite, so we have to wait maybe he has tricks up his sleeves or will make the update mindblowing if we wait patiently

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*getting kicked in the gut and the head metaphorically and electronically*

so mondays?

Do you know if maccon´s route is complete ???

Is it that I always get stuck in the part where Maccon and Jayce are cleaning the gym, and then the creator's message appears, or is it that I am doing something wrong to get to Maccon´s route ???

Sorry for my bad English, I'm using Translator again xd

nope its not complete yet more like it still ongoing

Hello I'm new to this VN and its really good so far because I deeply connected with Jayce. I have a question though, I see that there's routes, is there any way to get the routes? (sorry if it doesn't make any sense) I finished after having a panic attack school and Tom was there so idk if I'm on the Tom route. Just hoping someone can give me some info. :3 can't wait for more 

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Also it funny because in another VN (Extracurricular Activities) there's a character, Darius, who acts just like John and he's also a lion.

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I'd say Darius is more lewd than John, but I definitely can see some similarities.

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The first two choices decide your route.

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Currently, there are 4 routes

Go Left: Will lead you to either Maccon's or Rask's route. If you keep going, it'll be Maccon's route. If you head back, it'll be Rask's route. 

Go Right: Will lead you to either Tom's or John's route. If you switch with John, it'll be John's route. If you don't switch with John, it'll be Tom's route. 

Thank you for the info 😀

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No problem! 

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monchi hope u feeling well

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*crawling on the floor with no legs*

OMG, Does anyone know how to get to the Maccon´s route?

Sorry for my bad English I'm using a translator lol

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at the first choice, pick go left and then keep going

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AAAAAAAAAAAA A GREAT VN NYAAAAA >w<

I really loves how John proctect Jayce >w< cannot stop say awwwww

10/10 worth to try!! and see update every month.. cannot wait til next update >w<

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I don't know if its just me but I keep getting an error.

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Arg! Damn it! =w=9 *fix fix fix*

Thanks for the report .3./

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Thanks  so  much! I love the novel so far.  I almost kinda relate to the main character since I've also been struggling with anxiety lol.  I can't wait to see more!!!

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Aww, look at little Jayce!! Soo cute :3!!

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Honestly. I love the animations as well.

Yeah, they add a nice touch!!

Wait a min... we had a conversation on "Fero Moans" too XD!! But that topic was serious and it still is :(

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Oh yeah I remember you. I really hope hes not dead. because the dev was saying how sick he was.

This is actually a very ironic error

And hilarious 

I kinda want Monchi to keep it lol

NUUUU. I wanna see the images! But, honestly it is ironic. 

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loving the game excited for next part

I can be honest,that i'm a little sorry that poor Jayce,i can't with Tom,Maccon,John and Rask,to say or make his feelings understood and he gets tormented by.........i can't tell if they're hallucinations or not

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Wow!!, this VN is so cool it has an animation movements and with face expressions! And sound voices and the characters are so hoooot,amazing!! also i feel like the VN is from Asia tho cus im from asia...anyways thank you for making this its really incredible!!

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Oh my stars! Tom and Jhon are so awesome! They individually made me cry happy and sad tears in their own right. Creator, you are legendry! 

I remember my first panic attack, and then my worst one. Seeing it in this game, I was feeling his fear, his pain, the hopelessness, it was like seeing myself through someone else! 

Tom is wonderful, solid best friend. Jhon, I love him for being comfortable to joke around with, like my real friends.

Recently saw Rask, have to say, he is basically Jayce but rich, AND I LOVE HIM FOR BEING SO FREAKING INNOCENT AND EXITABLE FOR A KEYCHAIN! Although, maybe I am just poor but what keychain cost $12! 

Maccon, haven't seen a lot from him, but he seems so cool from Tom's route so far.

David, I like it when Jayce made him smile.


CREATOR! YOU! ARE! THE! BEAST!

and i say that with love :)

<3

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Love the newest update, it was pretty funny
still hoping for an update on our best boy Rask.

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Monchi said he'll finish Tom and Macoon's route before going for Rask and John.

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Hey guys, may i ask if David or Jhon is dateable? :D 

I also really enjoy the story. <3

John will eventually have a route. Part off his route is already in the game. 

But for now Monchi said he doesnt plan on a David route.

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crap

lovely <3

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Love this Game! Nearly cried from relativity.

same here. GOSH I LOVE IT

love the update, but can someone explain what happened at the end? Why were they shocked all of a sudden?

That is called a cliffhanger. We won't know until the next update. it's supposed to motivate us to play the next Maccoon Update too.

Play the other routes besides Maccoons and you might get an idea what this could be about...
just saying, i got my theories.

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Everything I say, I say in my own oppinion. I don't hate the game or anything, I honestly really like it, and just want it to become the best it can become.  With that out of the way here are my two cents to the update.

The more I play Maccoons route the more I wish there was a David route. 

Partially because David is just such a little buddy. He is adorable and the way David and Jayce both feel kinda comfortable around eachother is just such a nice character dynamic. And they do have something in common, namely El Tigre Lobo who they both are fans of. All in all their relationship just seems very natural.

Compared to that Jayces only real interest in Mac is his beefy himboness. That is one thing I really dislike about Macs route. Its ok to state that someone is hot and its ok to thirst alittle for them but Jayces thirst for the guy is honestly pretty creepy and not cute anymore. That is all he is to Jayce just a piece of meat he literally calls him that several times. Jayces only real connection to Mac is that Jayce is the crush of his best friend Tom and the friend of his little brother David. And I know it's a work in progress and I'm sure Jayce and Maccoon will get closer and learn new stuff about eachother. But the early game Maccoon route doesnt really give me any reason to ship them so to say. Just how I ship Tom and Jayce from their cute interactions. 

Speaking about Tom. I know in love and in war everything is allowed and that on the Mac route Jayce will obviously end up with Mac but its still kinda shitty for Mac to know exactly that Tom has a crush on Jayce but then still persue him romantically. Like I said that isn't anything against Mac if Tom doesn't confess in time. John is also in the same situation and I don't dislike him either for pursuing Jayce romatically. But still with a David route that conflict of interest doesn't exist he wouldn't know about the love life of his brothers friend after all. 

So what I am trying to say is that I like Mac as a character, good enough he isn't  bad, I just really dislike how Jayce acts around him. So the more calm and sweet interactions with David and Jayce are preferable to me.

Also to reiterate this post doesn't  mean I demand Macs route to be removed(which I don't want) or a David Route to be added(what I do want) it's your game and only you can decide that. But what I do wish for is for Mac and Jayce to be better, to get better chemistry other than "him hot bara me bury face in chest".

 Also don't get discouraged from this message Monchi, like I said I really REALLY LOVE the game. Toms route is the best written and the other two routes are very solid. Just keep working on it at your own pace!

Welp those are my thoughts and I am ready to accept all the downvotes I will get.

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I agree with pretty much everything you just said...literally every time time he sees Mac he's like ahaha hot beefy hunky slay daddy creams pants...even the panic attack thing...weird. I'd also like a David route because he's like the only character that has something in common with Jayce...I know that John and Tom have their past together, but sometimes, it just seems like there's some level of submittal obligation. I also do like the game, but I feel like the characters could some form of fleshing out to make them  more tolerable, emotionally impactful, and have their interactions not seems so cookie cutter cliché

Oh yeah the panic attack! I didn't wanna bring it up because it was kind of a one off joke. But after seeing a panic attack scene in Toms route I just feel that its handled way  better there. Fixing it with the power of sexy may be amusing alittle but with the same sexy joke  being beaten to death over and over it just takes the charm away. 

Hm I don't really see John and Toms relationship to Jayce that way, but now that you say it you're right they don't  seem to have much in common. 

I guess John and Jayce have the technology aspect with which they can bond. But Tom doesn't  really have anything like that I think. I mean they both hate their Dads. That is something they can relate about.

Also, we know Tom has a crush on Jayce but we never really got to learn why or why Tom even decided to speak with Jayce back in the day. That is easily fixed with future updates tho.

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i understand what both of you are saying, but im 95% shure that David is a minor, which is a complete nono, and should not/will not be made into a route

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Ok that may be the case but controversial take here. 

If he is in university with Jayce and John he will have to be pretty close age wise. So lets assume he is 17 the first half of the VN won't be NSFW anyway. And until the later half of the VN David could have his birthday and be 18 totally legal. 

I played another game called Tennis Ace where one of the Love interests starts out as 17 and the MC is 19 and they start dating when he still was 17. They do only cute stuff (for all the love interests) in the beginning and only late during the second half of the routes does anything remotely NSFW happen. And by then the love interest was 18. 

And it's nothing weird about it its not like the MC took advantage of him they were friends who just happened to be some ages apart but not as big an age gap than to call it pedophilia. 

Disclaimer this is just an idea and not meant to tell Monchi what to write. Again it's his VN if he doesn't want there to be a David route there won't but the possibility is there.

If we assume Davids route could be a branch off of Maccoons route it could go like his. 

David: "I like you go and fuck my brother"

Jayce:"Nuu too nervous and he is so sexy he would never want me"

They start becoming friends and David continues to try hook up Jayce with his bro. 

But slowly Davids feelings change he and Jayce while trying to hook up Jayce with Mac have bonded over alot of stuff and then when Jayce is about to actually fuck/ask out Mac David realizes his feelings.

Drama ensues. Maybe David would feel he isnt man enough for Jayce because Jayce clearly has a thing for Mac. Maybe the concerns about the age gap could be brought up by Mac himself he likes Jayce but doesnt like David dating Jayce his overprotective brotherly side won't allow it. Maybe after Jayce gets over Mac and actually considers David Tom swoops in and confesses for real (maybe pushed by Mac because again Mac doesnt want David to be dating Jayce) and Jayce would of course consider that too because Tom has been very good friends with Jayce and there is more history there.  There are alot of possible events that have nothing sexual about it before David needs to be of age. And all that could take like several weeks. Unless Monchi wants to keep it by a day by day basis then as convoluted as it sounds just make Davids birthday during one of these days. Or if that doesnt work maybe keep David as a completely vanilla sfw route. Not as popular but you dont need sex for love to exist.

 And again assuming David and Jayce are close enough age wise. And in a fictional setting age is an arbitrary number Monchi as the creator can decide which ages they are, so even if David is 16 right now he can just say he is 17 and later on he turns 18. Nobody can say thats wrong because Monchi is the creator.

I know there is a stigma against aging up characters to sexualize them but come on  pairs with age gaps exists and especially if its still after High School in University and they were friends before actually developing feelings then this is just a normal relationship like any other.

So yeah it is possible to write a David route without making it creepy its just up to Monchi.

We're talking about a one year gap at most. This shouldn't even be a discussion.

Unless you go on a grade skipping spree, you’d be eighteen by the time you hit college……late birthday or not. Although they act like children sometimes, their pretty much all the same age excluding Tom and Mac. And like Zero said…they’re pretty much the only two characters with a clear common personality trait….I say that’s a start to a decent route

let's see what happens then. I would be perfectly ok with either outcome, as i understand both points of opinion, Soo let's wait and see, more content is more content to me

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"Also, we know Tom has a crush on Jayce but we never really got to learn why or why Tom even decided to speak with Jayce back in the day. "

I thought it was obvious he decided to speak to Jayce BECAUSE he was already interested. Kinda had that happen to me too. A guy 2 years older went to me and started a conversation when I was all alone in school. 

Nothing really came out of that, we just interacted a little throughout the following years. It didn't even cross my mind at the time but when I look back and analyze it, he was clearly taking a chance with me. Tom had a similar aproach with Jayce, only it actually worked.

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Hmm maybe but I don't think anything has been confirmed. It could also just have been some random act of kindness he saw a kid alone and kinda sad so he tries to cheer him up. Just kinda the big brother in him reacting to a boy being alone.  Either way I still love Tom.

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"It could also just have been some random act of kindness he saw a kid alone and kinda sad so he tries to cheer him up" From their dialogue, Tom already knew Jayce from school. He was clearly eyeing him for a while.

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I don't find most of the interactions cliché.

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Agreed and I also prefer to see Jayce and David together. You missed the main point they have in common: Social awkwardness!

But who knows, monchi might turn Maccon's route into a stealth David route to surprise us. It certainly feels that way with all the David interactions so far.

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Hopefully lol

It's true Maccoons route right now has more meaningful David interactions than Maccoon interaction.

Although I dunno how I would feel about turning the whole Mac route into a David route. I think i would still prefer separate routes as long as Mac get some real character on his route.

Maybe have it so it branches off?

That was my first idea too. It would start out as Macs route, but then you can choose between Mac or David and at point the two routes would differ significantly.

I would love if David have a route too! But seeing the creator had trouble too with 4 character development.. I think it's best to leave it aside for now

noice new update ! i am hype UwU

Finally! I can play it in android

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I am in love and yet pissed that I found it at this point in time cause now I have to wait for more :( I wish I could forget about it and find it again later when there's more content cause right now I'm dying for more and it's torture not getting to see more.

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Try slamming your head on something to force amnesia :p

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thank you so much I'll do it tonight.  if you don't see another comment from me it means it worked. 

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I'm here to remind you so as to prolong your suffering. 

Uhm, you enjoying the game again?

haida had failed but you did their work for them with this comment 

?

Uhm, you're welcome. Enjoy the rest of your day, and remember, the mitochondria is the powerhouse of the cell. Oh, and that your mental health is just as important as your physical health.

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This is some really amazing work, the characters are so personable and don't seem to be one-dimensional. Jayce is adorable and very, very relateable. Good work! Will keep a keen eye on this.

I want to download this on android, but I'm not sure which to download as there's 3 android download links. Which one is the up to date one or one I should use?

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none, the android builds are buggy because of the new Renpy update atm.
download the game's windows version, then download Joiplay from playstore. open joiplay, download renpy patch (iirc) and then search the .Exe file of the game thru joiplay. thats the only workaround if you still want to play this on android

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oh I had this like a week ago and it was fine??? (I downloaded the first one)

download any, if one doesnt work then try the others.

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can someone give me the discord lick ?!


Ícone "Verificada pela comunidade"


https://discord.gg/XCqxY3M

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please tell me zale gets a route too! Like how the teacher did in extracurricular activities furry VN! Dragons are awesome!

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Nope .3./ but there is a scene about him :U *not yet implemented yet*

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No update today. My schedule is fucked up now from my inconsistencies ;w; LEAVE ME!!! ;C; LEAVE ME!!! *locks self in my room*

Was there supposed to be one? I don't see the schedule anywhere. Anyway, take your time.

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I think the schedule is that an update will be available on every 25th of the month? But tbh we already got one this month so I wasn't really expecting another update till next month.

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I have this game on itchio so does that mean it updates automatically?

u have to download it again i think

You need to check on this game for any new updates. If there is, you need to do it manually.

will there be an update today?

Did Jayce's sprites get a little different during the latest update?

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YALLL I MADE IT TOO GOOGLE YAAAYYY

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this is a really charming VN!!! I am in love with Tom !!

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This is super fun! Jayce veers between relatable and a little *too* relatable from my awkward dorky college days, haha. Also, the sprite animations really elevate the presentation, though I'm sure they're a pain to code. There's a lot of action and expressiveness that you don't see in a lot of VNs. Great work so far!

Also, props for the scenes with the silly Cowboy Bebop music!

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how many paths/routes are there?

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curently i've only seen the endings where Jayce has a panic attack and the other where we go with david to the ice cream truck owned by his uncle

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There will be 4 routes, Tom, John, Maccon and Rask. 

Tom and Maccon take priority while John and Rask's routes will only progress after the other two routes are finished.

wait what? Who's Rask?

The gray rich wolf. 

LITERALLY FORGOT ABOUT HIM TOO LMFAO

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