The way that information is served scarcely makes me wanna play all the routes just for the sake of knowing why being a mixed is a bad thing or what's up with Leo and Lupus. It's a really amazing👍 tactics on your part. I was just going to play Tom's route but now I'm already done with all of them (still knows very little though, i hope someone can help me understand this subject more)
Well, before the changes from some of the last few updates the pressure against mixing races was explained. Though, they then re-did some of the characters (which I find great I think the stories and sprites are better now). Anyway, assuming the reason against mixing races has not changed, it is that even very closely related species mixing will most likely result in children with extreme birth defects resulting in their death. On Maccon's old route, he explains that his (I believe) cousin died at the age of five because he was a mixed species. His organs were so malformed that he was bed ridden until he died. They even mention that outside of the states (I am assuming the United States when they said that) that mixed species marriage is not allowed specifically to prevent that. Maccon then asks the Main Character if he has any defects, the main character says no that doctor's have exaimened him before and that he seems to have only inherited the stripes. Maccon then says he is happy he is healthy. Being mixed is also the reason Jayce, Main Character, hides his stripes under a hat as his father was at least part tiger. His hat being taken and Maccon seeing his stripes being the reason the whole conversation started.
It's beautiful the game is coming out,although i admit that certain things in the story escape me,perhaps for the simple reason that i don't pay so much attention to it.Still grat work,keep it up
Well so far I am absolutely loving this game but I have to ask, What's up with Jayce? Like is he a hybrid or something? And if so is that why his parent's relationship is implied to be rocky?
If I recall correctly, Jayce is a mix of two different species. In terms of appearance, he mostly got feline looks from one parent and the stripes come from the other. Can't remember which did he get from who though.
For the parent's relationship, I don't think it's been shown that his parents have a rocky relationship? Other than Jayce's father being kinda an ass to him, that's the most that's been shown about his parents, I think.
Thanks for the clarification, to be clear when I said that Jayce's parents have a troubled relationship I'm basing it on a line from Tom's route where Jayce says that his parent's fought on every one of his Birthdays. But seriously thank you for the clarification I really appreciate it.
Mmm... Can't say I'm a huge fan of the new sprite rework. The new sprites honestly don't look all that bad most of the time now that I'm seeing them in action, but they do have a much higher tendency of looking really awkward compared to the old sprites, namely Tom and John's sprites - especiallyJohn's sprite. I can't really explain it much better than John's sprite just looks awkward and out of place compared to the other new sprites. I think the issues I have might be with John's hand and hair; his hand just looks really off compared to the rest of the sprite and his hair looks like it's constantly blowing in a breeze that doesn't affect anyone else... I think... I honestly can't really pinpoint anything else specific about John's sprite that might be putting me off... Maybe I'm just biased towards the old sprites' style over the new ones.
Anyways, the new story content was really nice to see; seeing Jayce thirst after Big Mac even in Tom's route is fun to see! As was Tom's flustered expression when Jayce woke up during his... Treatment... ;)
Looking forward to Mac's update next time around; Jayce seems pretty thirsty and I bet he wouldn't mind a bit of Mac's protein shake, if you catch my drift! *wink wink*
Has anyone else put their name as "my butt" to see how the characters would put your name in a sentence and once you've read the sentence you laugh or is it just me?
I would like to ask, If i download the new 0.15 version can I still play the old 0.14 seperately? Or do I need to delete my 0.14 file because it would cause some kind of error?
I really love the new sprites of the characters, rask is my favorite, it looks very cute, also that for a moment I thought you had removed the animation of the blinking, but it is more like that sometimes it does not appear (for example at the beginning of the Tom's route none of the brothers blinks), but regarding Tom's story in this update, I love to see little by little memories of how Tom and Jayce were in the past, besides that what he fainted about was very funny, Can't wait to see how it goes on, splendid job
Just a thought but it seems you go from one characters path to another every month? Is there a way you could maybe focus on the content for one character at a time? All the characters are good but I kinda want more to sink my teeth into at once? Maybe hold some poll voting to see who people want updated the most? It might also help keep you from getting writers block with the story.
I think it's better going like this? If he focuses too much into one route, other routes might not seem as exciting and some info that's said in the far away future of route A may cause dissaponting reveal of the same information in route B
I thought Jayce already could die in front of Rask. I think he even was killed by Rask. ( SPOILER it was a gag response if you chose in the Steak House to get a well done steak. Also the new death scene is nothing with Rask. SPOILER END)
i stopped playing mid game to tell you i love you for what you did you made a very relatable gay character he is very funny, smart, and dumb. i give props and thanks for the undertale reference
Hey monchie I dont know but I'm not able to download this vn I downloaded the old one but this new one isnt, I know u probably gonna hate this but atleast u can try to fix it if u got time.
also nice story by the way I really loved it and the song played in the main menu ,ur work is definitely worth a lot for making this and I appreciate it and thank you
Bro I did not expect to see Tom without his jacket- hes good looking 😳
and then we see Maccon 😳
The new sprites look great and you somehow managed to make Tom look even hotter-
I really love your writing its cute and funny and the amount of work you do with animating and making them interact with each other is incredible, I can't wait for more of Tom's and Maccon's route!
I wish we could have the option to hide the text box on mobile, its hard to get a good look at the sprites.
I replayed every route again during this new sprite update and discovered that i haven't encountered that scene with rask and the cabin before skl, overall still loving the story and keep up the good work
It's never been an issue for me, but there were plenty of typos in the most recent build so it was noticeable, and "pamilia", which is mentioned twice, should be "familia".
That being said, I'm loving the new sprites, they're great and made me like John (in particular) even more. The Tom content made me really happy as well since he's my fav, you can really tell how much he adores Jayce and it's so damn adorable <3
i don't know, maybe in the shock of moment he think that jayce has a heart atack and try to revive him pressing in her bare chest? (it was so hilarius that i really don't see much a explanation here xd)
Totally agree! Every other route also hints at that Jayce and Tom are or should be a thing! Also it just feels wrong to think about that Tom had this crush on Jayce for the longest time just for him to fall for someone else.(And its not like Jayce has no feelings for Tom he also likes him)
Went through all the routes in like, this morning. I adoooore Tom so much holy shit, his dynamic with Jayce is so good and I love the current plotline in it so far. Mac is also a top tier husbando. n general, I really like this vn and really wanna see more of it. You're doing great Monchi!
In my opinion maccon and Tom looks great in this update especially their beefy body lol and of course their expresion, but for some reasons tom head is looks so tinny compared to his body lol or it's just me, and for john and rask they looks welp weird i guess, for John the different is in his eyes that always looks like half close make his smile looks difrent more like a cool person smile lol rather than his old Sprite that make us feel he is a cheerful person, but his new Sprite looks great with John front face perspective, for rask i more prefer his old Sprite since it's feel much smoother, but this new Sprite is not bad at all, anyway i feel this vn is more mature in many ways lol, so thanks for your update keep happy and healthy.
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Mewry Christmas everyone lol
The way that information is served scarcely makes me wanna play all the routes just for the sake of knowing why being a mixed is a bad thing or what's up with Leo and Lupus. It's a really amazing👍 tactics on your part. I was just going to play Tom's route but now I'm already done with all of them (still knows very little though, i hope someone can help me understand this subject more)
Well, before the changes from some of the last few updates the pressure against mixing races was explained. Though, they then re-did some of the characters (which I find great I think the stories and sprites are better now). Anyway, assuming the reason against mixing races has not changed, it is that even very closely related species mixing will most likely result in children with extreme birth defects resulting in their death. On Maccon's old route, he explains that his (I believe) cousin died at the age of five because he was a mixed species. His organs were so malformed that he was bed ridden until he died. They even mention that outside of the states (I am assuming the United States when they said that) that mixed species marriage is not allowed specifically to prevent that. Maccon then asks the Main Character if he has any defects, the main character says no that doctor's have exaimened him before and that he seems to have only inherited the stripes. Maccon then says he is happy he is healthy. Being mixed is also the reason Jayce, Main Character, hides his stripes under a hat as his father was at least part tiger. His hat being taken and Maccon seeing his stripes being the reason the whole conversation started.
Ouch, seems like the old script is pretty dark, i mean overall the topics about species in this VN is pretty dark.
I'm totally LOVING this game so far. The art is great, the writing is good and it's so freaking funny! Can't wait to see the next update :3
9w9 The game is still in developement... patreon is just my donation tip jar.
Meh .3. *staring at four characters*
It's beautiful the game is coming out,although i admit that certain things in the story escape me,perhaps for the simple reason that i don't pay so much attention to it.Still grat work,keep it up
Love it! I want to help in making this vn... Can i?
Well so far I am absolutely loving this game but I have to ask, What's up with Jayce? Like is he a hybrid or something? And if so is that why his parent's relationship is implied to be rocky?
If I recall correctly, Jayce is a mix of two different species. In terms of appearance, he mostly got feline looks from one parent and the stripes come from the other. Can't remember which did he get from who though.
For the parent's relationship, I don't think it's been shown that his parents have a rocky relationship? Other than Jayce's father being kinda an ass to him, that's the most that's been shown about his parents, I think.
Thanks for the clarification, to be clear when I said that Jayce's parents have a troubled relationship I'm basing it on a line from Tom's route where Jayce says that his parent's fought on every one of his Birthdays. But seriously thank you for the clarification I really appreciate it.
Mmm... Can't say I'm a huge fan of the new sprite rework. The new sprites honestly don't look all that bad most of the time now that I'm seeing them in action, but they do have a much higher tendency of looking really awkward compared to the old sprites, namely Tom and John's sprites - especially John's sprite. I can't really explain it much better than John's sprite just looks awkward and out of place compared to the other new sprites. I think the issues I have might be with John's hand and hair; his hand just looks really off compared to the rest of the sprite and his hair looks like it's constantly blowing in a breeze that doesn't affect anyone else... I think... I honestly can't really pinpoint anything else specific about John's sprite that might be putting me off... Maybe I'm just biased towards the old sprites' style over the new ones.
Anyways, the new story content was really nice to see; seeing Jayce thirst after Big Mac even in Tom's route is fun to see! As was Tom's flustered expression when Jayce woke up during his... Treatment... ;)
Looking forward to Mac's update next time around; Jayce seems pretty thirsty and I bet he wouldn't mind a bit of Mac's protein shake, if you catch my drift! *wink wink*
Just started playing this recently.
I absolutely LOVE that the models are animated to show that they are eating. It's not much but it is nice to see some life in them.
Has anyone else put their name as "my butt" to see how the characters would put your name in a sentence and once you've read the sentence you laugh or is it just me?
I would like to ask, If i download the new 0.15 version can I still play the old 0.14 seperately? Or do I need to delete my 0.14 file because it would cause some kind of error?
No sure .3.a but most likely the saves won't work anymore I think.
I really love the new sprites of the characters, rask is my favorite, it looks very cute, also that for a moment I thought you had removed the animation of the blinking, but it is more like that sometimes it does not appear (for example at the beginning of the Tom's route none of the brothers blinks), but regarding Tom's story in this update, I love to see little by little memories of how Tom and Jayce were in the past, besides that what he fainted about was very funny, Can't wait to see how it goes on, splendid job
so i found this bug(?) when play on john's route on day 2 at the cafeteria when i chose "discourage" i already restart the game and it still happen
When did you download it? .3.a the day of publishing or the day after?
yes 5 hours after the new version published
It's fixed now .3./ but don't think its much to download again.
Just a thought but it seems you go from one characters path to another every month? Is there a way you could maybe focus on the content for one character at a time? All the characters are good but I kinda want more to sink my teeth into at once? Maybe hold some poll voting to see who people want updated the most? It might also help keep you from getting writers block with the story.
I think it's better going like this? If he focuses too much into one route, other routes might not seem as exciting and some info that's said in the far away future of route A may cause dissaponting reveal of the same information in route B
That.......is a very good point that I cannot argue. I am just impatient and each chapter is amazing and leaves me wanting so much more
Jayce can die now? Damn. That's dark. I want to die in front of Rask though to give him mental trauma.
I thought Jayce already could die in front of Rask. I think he even was killed by Rask. ( SPOILER it was a gag response if you chose in the Steak House to get a well done steak. Also the new death scene is nothing with Rask. SPOILER END)
BRUH. Damn, I want to die more.
i stopped playing mid game to tell you i love you for what you did you made a very relatable gay character he is very funny, smart, and dumb. i give props and thanks for the undertale reference
Hey monchie I dont know but I'm not able to download this vn I downloaded the old one but this new one isnt, I know u probably gonna hate this but atleast u can try to fix it if u got time.
You have to be specific on which one you're talking about .3. the PC, MAC or Android?
also nice story by the way I really loved it and the song played in the main menu ,ur work is definitely worth a lot for making this and I appreciate it and thank you
I'm using android but dont worry I finally got it
we don’t waste soap 💀
Bro I did not expect to see Tom without his jacket- hes good looking 😳
and then we see Maccon 😳
The new sprites look great and you somehow managed to make Tom look even hotter-
I really love your writing its cute and funny and the amount of work you do with animating and making them interact with each other is incredible, I can't wait for more of Tom's and Maccon's route!
I wish we could have the option to hide the text box on mobile, its hard to get a good look at the sprites.
nice game bro.
I don't get three scenes from the last Screenshot of the game.... How?!!
I personally preferred the old Rask sprite overall, the new sprite feels like his clothes are too 'baggy'/oversized, which doesn't really fit him
I replayed every route again during this new sprite update and discovered that i haven't encountered that scene with rask and the cabin before skl, overall still loving the story and keep up the good work
It's never been an issue for me, but there were plenty of typos in the most recent build so it was noticeable, and "pamilia", which is mentioned twice, should be "familia".
That being said, I'm loving the new sprites, they're great and made me like John (in particular) even more. The Tom content made me really happy as well since he's my fav, you can really tell how much he adores Jayce and it's so damn adorable <3
Please explain to me why Tom took Jayce shirt off ??
i don't know, maybe in the shock of moment he think that jayce has a heart atack and try to revive him pressing in her bare chest? (it was so hilarius that i really don't see much a explanation here xd)
thank you and I agree it was funny
I'm guessing David's never going to have a route?
I can't help but feel that this game is never going to be finished.
Sir, please give us Tom's winking with blep face sprites ; w ;
yay daddy tommy ;P
The new sprites look amazing!
Hey when I go to download it a pop up says that its invalid, do you know what this is about?
Never mind I got it working
To me, Tom's route is the canonical route. Jayce and Tom are meant for each other.
True, Maccon is exactly my type as the player. But for Jayce the character, Tom is definitely it so far.
Totally agree! Every other route also hints at that Jayce and Tom are or should be a thing! Also it just feels wrong to think about that Tom had this crush on Jayce for the longest time just for him to fall for someone else.(And its not like Jayce has no feelings for Tom he also likes him)
Oh my God ! I'm just woke up this morning and thinking about checking VN's update, then i saw this precious update
And this is really made my day, THANKS SM
I love this VN sm, best VN among the best ones! Keep it up Monchimutt!
Went through all the routes in like, this morning. I adoooore Tom so much holy shit, his dynamic with Jayce is so good and I love the current plotline in it so far. Mac is also a top tier husbando. n general, I really like this vn and really wanna see more of it. You're doing great Monchi!
In my opinion maccon and Tom looks great in this update especially their beefy body lol and of course their expresion, but for some reasons tom head is looks so tinny compared to his body lol or it's just me, and for john and rask they looks welp weird i guess, for John the different is in his eyes that always looks like half close make his smile looks difrent more like a cool person smile lol rather than his old Sprite that make us feel he is a cheerful person, but his new Sprite looks great with John front face perspective, for rask i more prefer his old Sprite since it's feel much smoother, but this new Sprite is not bad at all, anyway i feel this vn is more mature in many ways lol, so thanks for your update keep happy and healthy.
Unfortunate, I preferred Rask's previous sprite, his new one looks bigger and honestly a little jarring.
Same. I thought his old sprite captured his personality perfectly.
10/10 update the art overhaul is amazing, love the humor (my favorite so far),
andHORNYPS Jayce definitely want to be between a T and Mac sandwich