Wait, what happened to bebeh Jayce from the flashback in Tom's route?! He's not showing up now! I was making my new save files for Tom's route to just keep everything up to date and see that cute flashback again, but there was no bebeh Jayce! Where is my precious bebeh boi?!
Not sure if anyone else has noticed this but for me at least Rask's route is broken on the android version. At the start of day 2 when you meet John and Rask at school, the conversation jumps to the train choice of pushing John off your lap or letting him lie there right after he mentions the fast food that Rask bought. If you try to keep playing it crashes from there.
Did you start a new game? There is a specific value that must be triggered at the start of his route otherwise it'll go crazy as I've warned in the dev logs @3@
I have to say that I liked this update a lot, it is not one of the best but it is decent, my favorite part was where rask praises jayce's stripes, also that even though the day felt like a copy and paste of john's he knew how to mark his Originality, although I must say that now there is more mystery in Tom's name, since here it says that his surname is nully, but on his route, in the memory of Jayce he makes a mistake and says sarabi, but then he corrects himself by saying nully. .. this now left me very intrigued (also the fact that now for some reason he likes rask ... even though he probably just respects him ... also another thing I have to say is that the end of rask leaves me intrigued, already that having two uncles is very mysterious and living in the middle of a forest is very suspicious ... at least for me) *insert sound of making crazy theories*
I also forgot to say that in the part of the memory where jayce meets tom for the first time there is an bug ... or so I think, since the image of jayce is not seen as a child ... it will be a mistake or is it to keep it as a secret?
I made a mistake when I was optimizing the codes for the sprites TT3TT, it's fixed now but I have to do compile everything again and upload ;3;// THE CRUELTIES OF EFFICIENCY!!
I'm about to start playing this game... does it have any explicit sexual scenes or explicit nudity scenes? Or at least sexual tension between characters somehow? Just to be sure, thanks :)
Now i really want to know all their high comparison lol and how strong jayce really are he even can't control his own power, and i also really want to see him in gym with maccon and see can maccon control jayce power🙃.
all routes are only on their second day dude, you cant expect anything crazy to happen jet, it will mostly be overlap between the characters routes for some time, if it jumped straight into the ham and cheese, i wouldnt feel paced would it. you cant have every update be incredible, especially the first one. gotta give him time
I love all their front portraits~, they look so goooood, (also like the little detail on the starting menu art of the Caller's name on the phone whenever you end each route~)
Loved the newest update, especially how you have integrated the stripes story into rasks route now. was very nice to read.
Also ,always, Rask is best boy .....and i know someday he will surprise everyone with witty comebacks after he has watched his friends long enough. ^v^
When rask "killed" us SCARED THE CRAP OUT OF ME, omg even the music stops, you should DEFFENITLY add a little screamer in that part or a CG of rask stabbings us
Could you please make it to were you can choose to order the well done stake, I was honestly a little mad that the game chastised my choice in steaks and then prevented me from choosing it, so could you please make it an actual choice and not a gag choice?
Sooo.. I'm reading the comments and I figure that everyone is getting into some "routes". But my game stopped at pretty start saying something about patreon, does that mean I can't play it "yet"? Oh and I play with Android, if that even matters, any info could be useful THANKS.
So I can now continue playing? When the game stopped it was when you said "thanks for playing" in early game and it stopped. And it still does that. Also THANK you very much for you response, really appreciate it!
I feel Tom, John, and Rask will be more interesting. For Tom there is hints he has romantic feelings for Jayce according to a certain dialogue in Maccon's route (I feel bad for Tom in Maccon's route for going for Maccon), Tom's whispering and the the flashback and the reason why they haven't see each other for years makes it more interesting for what's come. In John's route I think it's a transition from a best friend to a boyfriend because of the CG and John moving in to Jayce's house. Finally for Rask is will interesting because of the social norms of him being a Gray and how will people react to him interacting with Jayce. I look forward to see more!
Tom is great and Jayce is super real. My heart breaks for him holy cow the poor guy. Well I'll just have to hook him up with Tom and get him some well deserved love. :P
I was playing maccon's route again and I found that there is a small error, the scene where David appears still happens on this route knowing that you already sat with him and saw them (so it should not happen ... although it is also curious that It only happens in the pc version ... I'm also sorry that it's a photo, I don't know how to take a screen or to the pc without the game becoming invisible :V)
I think that when Cole gets angry, instead of calling them millenials he should call them zoomers, because it's more accurate and funnier imo.
Also I really like how different routes affect the other characters as well, like how Tom invites you to the gym because of Maccon instead of having a serious talk about shitty parents when you run away from him in the morning.
I love the inclusion of Jayce's portrait for when he speaks, it may not seem like much to some but being able to see the protagonist's face in a first person visual novel isn't a given. Although I'm a bit confused at the inclusion of the front facing portraits for John and Rask when you also see their full body sprites, I believe the front facing portraits should be used whenever characters are "in your party" per se, so imagine they're next to Jayce, while he is talking to a third character (is that clear? Or should I try rephrasing that im not sure if it's understandable)
All in all this is a great wip VN, I plan on starting to support you on patreon soon, you deserve it monchimutt!
by all means keep experimenting, it looks good so far, im only giving an opinion from the perspective of someone who has no idea how hard it is to make a game like this. Good luck for the coming future!
It is really worth the wait, I loved the update, I really think that John is very funny, also the thing of train seemed very cute, although I have to say that the sprits from the front look a bit strange but it really was a good addition, also that I like that that things from other routes are applied is very good, but I really loved that that John did in the end I really liked it and I think he made it one of my favorite routes (because it is the funniest xd ... although I still have doubts about his parents :v)
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I've just started playing, and looks like Lask will be my favourite route
Tom is my baby so cute, so handsome
It's so obvious he's head over heels in love with Jayce. Yet Jayce is completely obvious to it. The whole situation must be painful to Tom...
Wait, what happened to bebeh Jayce from the flashback in Tom's route?! He's not showing up now! I was making my new save files for Tom's route to just keep everything up to date and see that cute flashback again, but there was no bebeh Jayce! Where is my precious bebeh boi?!
He was... TAKEN!! ;3;9 BY THE BUGS!! \ ;3;/
EEEEEEEEEEEEEE DA CHARACTERS ARE ALWAYS DA CUTESTTTTTTTTTTT IMMA KILL PEOPLE IF THEY SAY DIS AINT CUUUTEEEEE(dis is fucking adorable)
Whats the diffenrent between opt 3 and opt 4 adroid download?
Some android phones don't work so they have to choose between the two that works.
Not sure if anyone else has noticed this but for me at least Rask's route is broken on the android version. At the start of day 2 when you meet John and Rask at school, the conversation jumps to the train choice of pushing John off your lap or letting him lie there right after he mentions the fast food that Rask bought. If you try to keep playing it crashes from there.
Did you start a new game? There is a specific value that must be triggered at the start of his route otherwise it'll go crazy as I've warned in the dev logs @3@
Yea I started a new game several times and tried different choices to see if it was a specific choice that did it but couldn't make it past the bug.
Hmm... that bug is from last patch. Are you sure you downloaded the right one? .14 is the current version and I tested it myself, again.
Soooo... make sure .3./
I tried uninstalling and reinstalling and it worked this time. I guess I must've screwed up the update somehow, thanks for the help!
I have to say that I liked this update a lot, it is not one of the best but it is decent, my favorite part was where rask praises jayce's stripes, also that even though the day felt like a copy and paste of john's he knew how to mark his Originality, although I must say that now there is more mystery in Tom's name, since here it says that his surname is nully, but on his route, in the memory of Jayce he makes a mistake and says sarabi, but then he corrects himself by saying nully. .. this now left me very intrigued (also the fact that now for some reason he likes rask ... even though he probably just respects him ... also another thing I have to say is that the end of rask leaves me intrigued, already that having two uncles is very mysterious and living in the middle of a forest is very suspicious ... at least for me) *insert sound of making crazy theories*
I also forgot to say that in the part of the memory where jayce meets tom for the first time there is an bug ... or so I think, since the image of jayce is not seen as a child ... it will be a mistake or is it to keep it as a secret?
I made a mistake when I was optimizing the codes for the sprites TT3TT, it's fixed now but I have to do compile everything again and upload ;3;// THE CRUELTIES OF EFFICIENCY!!
Gallery doesn't seem to work...
Dev's still working on it. The choice is there but it's still not functional.
I'm about to start playing this game... does it have any explicit sexual scenes or explicit nudity scenes? Or at least sexual tension between characters somehow? Just to be sure, thanks :)
Not....Yet, i think
Sorry but your answer doesn't convince me... there aren't any explicit scenes, am i wrong?
No, there aren't any explicit scenes as of the moment but the developer plans to add explicit scenes later on when the story gets to it.
Okay, then. Thanks. How long does it take to update? Once a month, like other VNs?
Yes.
Yep! Once a month, on the 25th.
How to get to Rask's route?
on day one: take a left, then head back
And how to get to John's route?
Day one: Take a right, switch seats with John
OH MY LORD. FRONT FACING TOM. *Swoon*
this rask's day ending is really funny one lol no spoiler just find it your self😉
Now i really want to know all their high comparison lol and how strong jayce really are he even can't control his own power, and i also really want to see him in gym with maccon and see can maccon control jayce power🙃.
Not much of an update... Totally weak.
all routes are only on their second day dude, you cant expect anything crazy to happen jet, it will mostly be overlap between the characters routes for some time, if it jumped straight into the ham and cheese, i wouldnt feel paced would it. you cant have every update be incredible, especially the first one. gotta give him time
I love all their front portraits~, they look so goooood, (also like the little detail on the starting menu art of the Caller's name on the phone whenever you end each route~)
Loved the newest update, especially how you have integrated the stripes story into rasks route now. was very nice to read.
Also ,always, Rask is best boy
.....and i know someday he will surprise everyone with witty comebacks after he has watched his friends long enough. ^v^
Yay update, its 01:15 in my country and looks like it's a good thing to stay awake at night lol thank u monchimutt
When rask "killed" us SCARED THE CRAP OUT OF ME, omg even the music stops, you should DEFFENITLY add a little screamer in that part or a CG of rask stabbings us
Could you please make it to were you can choose to order the well done stake, I was honestly a little mad that the game chastised my choice in steaks and then prevented me from choosing it, so could you please make it an actual choice and not a gag choice?
Another delay, PLEASE STOP THROWING SNITZELS AT ME!! *sleeps under salted pretzels*
*throws unsalted pretzel at you* TAKE YOUR TIME >:3
*passes a cup of water* stay hydrated
Ok... We throw fries INSTEAD!!
take all the time you need, patience is a virtue to have something of quality :3
Is their patch notes for the update 15 hours ago?
Sooo.. I'm reading the comments and I figure that everyone is getting into some "routes". But my game stopped at pretty start saying something about patreon, does that mean I can't play it "yet"? Oh and I play with Android, if that even matters, any info could be useful THANKS.
All routes are now open. Problem before is that some assets and story doesn't follow how I wanted so I had to block them out.
So I can now continue playing? When the game stopped it was when you said "thanks for playing" in early game and it stopped. And it still does that. Also THANK you very much for you response, really appreciate it!
Will we able to date Zale to?
Okay so Mac route was just a left in turn......so right will still continue?
Just me or the more insecure someone is the more likely they will snark at everything?
Wait... Why is there 2 downloads for android. Which one should I download? ._.
If one doesn't work, try the other .3./
Really weird problem with Android
Dang @3@ what route is this?
I think Tom's route.
I believe this is John's route, as his is the only one that gets to the second day, which is when this scene occurs.
Oh yeah saw it on the windows too
I feel Tom, John, and Rask will be more interesting. For Tom there is hints he has romantic feelings for Jayce according to a certain dialogue in Maccon's route (I feel bad for Tom in Maccon's route for going for Maccon), Tom's whispering and the the flashback and the reason why they haven't see each other for years makes it more interesting for what's come. In John's route I think it's a transition from a best friend to a boyfriend because of the CG and John moving in to Jayce's house. Finally for Rask is will interesting because of the social norms of him being a Gray and how will people react to him interacting with Jayce. I look forward to see more!
I'm thinking Maccon will be just as interesting. I get the feeling he may have something to do with El Tigre Lobo, Jayce's childhood hero.
Found a grammer error in John's route. It goes: "I can't depend on other people's handouts! Jayce."
Tom is great and Jayce is super real. My heart breaks for him holy cow the poor guy. Well I'll just have to hook him up with Tom and get him some well deserved love. :P
My favorites is so far is Tom, John and Rask. But Tom's and Rask's route is short. When's the next update?
every 25th of the month...also if the creator don't have any problem xd (but it say it though :v)
Thnx dude.
I MUST SAY HOW IN THE HELL IS NO ONE TALKING ABOUT BABY TOM AND BABY JAYCE HELLO???? LIKE, THEY'RE ADORABLE???????
Anyway I freaking love the CGs, and ngl I was taken by surprise on John's cg and that cg probably make me like him more-
I was playing maccon's route again and I found that there is a small error, the scene where David appears still happens on this route knowing that you already sat with him and saw them (so it should not happen ... although it is also curious that It only happens in the pc version ... I'm also sorry that it's a photo, I don't know how to take a screen or to the pc without the game becoming invisible :V)
Hmmm owoa I'm sure I uploaded the fix for it. Well upon checking I already fixed it on my part .3.a so next update then!
I think that when Cole gets angry, instead of calling them millenials he should call them zoomers, because it's more accurate and funnier imo.
Also I really like how different routes affect the other characters as well, like how Tom invites you to the gym because of Maccon instead of having a serious talk about shitty parents when you run away from him in the morning.
I love the inclusion of Jayce's portrait for when he speaks, it may not seem like much to some but being able to see the protagonist's face in a first person visual novel isn't a given. Although I'm a bit confused at the inclusion of the front facing portraits for John and Rask when you also see their full body sprites, I believe the front facing portraits should be used whenever characters are "in your party" per se, so imagine they're next to Jayce, while he is talking to a third character (is that clear? Or should I try rephrasing that im not sure if it's understandable)
All in all this is a great wip VN, I plan on starting to support you on patreon soon, you deserve it monchimutt!
The front portrait is meant to show that their in a position that they can't just stand around or there's no much to do in the scene.
.3.a course this is all experimental so if it doesn't make sense or I'm just killing myself, I'll do something about it .3./ lol.
by all means keep experimenting, it looks good so far, im only giving an opinion from the perspective of someone who has no idea how hard it is to make a game like this. Good luck for the coming future!
I NEED MORE TOM RIGHT NOW! >:( The Maccon route Tom is so cute and I need him in my life ^w^
Same he is so much gayer in the Maccon route, hope something involving the both of them eventually comes up >:)
really liked the new update. and even on johns route Rask shows why he is the most adorable Pup and my favorit.
Why does it say that it has been updated 9 minutes ago? I don't see anything new...
Bug fixes.
Oh, ok.
It is really worth the wait, I loved the update, I really think that John is very funny, also the thing of train seemed very cute, although I have to say that the sprits from the front look a bit strange but it really was a good addition, also that I like that that things from other routes are applied is very good, but I really loved that that John did in the end I really liked it and I think he made it one of my favorite routes (because it is the funniest xd ... although I still have doubts about his parents :v)