Played the vn, I must say that it does well indeed have a good writing! I was hoping for David's route though :( ... Nonetheless it is amazing overall.
Also I heard that this is a rework of your old vn. Is there any option for me to try or download the old patches? Would appreciate if anyone would tell me.
So I finished my first play-through yesterday. It was fun but I didn't get much of an ending. I didn't even see two of the backgrounds from the images on this page. I'm looking forward to trying some different paths next time!
Yo! Found a spelling error. When in the place where you eat with Tom, Jayce starts speaking about his childhood hero, he mentions: "He only does it to >>>villians<<<"
just finished all the content the game has to (currently) give and my god coming from playing 2 VNs with heavy topics this is a nice change of pace!! the goofiness of this VN is very funny and I cannot wait for more!
I'm starting the game from scratch, and I'm going through Maccon's route again and honestly came to see if there was any announcement of David getting a route. You're spending so much time with him now!
I know multiple people have requested it and I liked someone's suggestion of him having a birthday shortly after starting college so he'd be legal.
Aside from John, he's honestly my favorite character... while Maccon's my least favorite.
If it's not much to ask, please tell me which version of Android works with you guys .w./ So that I can tally and see which one actually works for everyone.
Is it possible to color-code the android downloads to know which is the new one? Its rather annoying having to download the apk and install it just to see the "Can't Install" logo because its the wrong apk >3<
I have tried both versions 10 times(redownload) and I always get black screen of death after launch on Android. I spent 10 hours trying to get it to load and it hasn't worked so figure I should report it.
6w6 I hate android... =3=a only suggestion I can make (Since I can only depend on Renpy's compiler) is to download the PC version and download and use Joi player in the playstore.
I played this VN months ago, and I decided to come back to this now to see its progress. I was really surprised at how there was a complete rewrite of the entire story, and not to mention there was barely any progress from where I left.
Okay, um... you're going to barely progress this way (mostly as a writer) if you keep on doing this.
I'd like to say that the VN is kind of 90% dialogue and 10% narration to me. (Whether this is good or bad, I don't know. This is a visual novel, and so, the art, images, and sfx already satisfy the reader when they read.)
To me, the narration or writing style felt more plot-driven or straight-forward. Of course, I still found the flowery language that's present.
Jayce's childish and goofy nature is really evident throughout the entire story. Maccon's character gives off 'big daddy' vibes (asides from the external looks). John is the naughty kind of boy while David has the enigmatic, quiet troublemaker trope I guess. As for Tom, eh, he's more of a friendly brother, I guess?
Personally, there were scenes that I found quite boring or slow, not much going on and kind of meh.
I've yet to go to the other routes, so I don't really have all that much to say.
Overall, I don't hate it. The best advice I have to say is, to literally just keep on going. Don't rewrite again unless you're finished or you have something that fundamentally changes the story. It can be bothersome to the readers, but hey, it's your story.
okay so i just starting the new update and i got to say, you should TOTALLY add that "why are you running" meme audio to the game, not only is it a missed opportunity if there is a visual novel it fits so well with in terms of goofiness its this one X3
Ok i have some problems with the android build. It starts up normally with the renpy logo but then the game doesnt start. I managed to get it to work once but most of the time after the renpy logo it will just be a black screen. No idea what could be the problem.
I tried both but for both the same outcome. And I tried it several times and only got it to work twice. I dunno what i did differently to open the game normally those two times, it seems random if it decides to work or not. And if i close the app after it just worked it will not work again after.
Well it seems I'm the only one with that problem, so thats good. Also I played through the Tom update so I wont open the game until the next update again. So I just hope the next updates android version won't have that problem. Maybe it was just a one time fluke. Take your time with the next update nwn!
when I saw this game I could not wait to see what happens next and I ship Mac and jay all the way! and him with Rask and Tom I how to see the next update be bigger than the last! but I can wait to so don't worry I won't rush you.
I find this vn too relatable personally to give proper criticism. What I will say is take your time with it(with the sick-neck-thing) and make sure your heart is in it. Love this vn and find the art and animation beautiful.
I will try to find some healthy criticism to give, but that'll have to wait until future updates or I play it enough times. Either way, keep up the great work! :)
I love how the characters act to different things, also when Jayce needs to eat, and just goes OMNOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOM like crazy, no fucks or anything
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Kinda want a small walkthrough on how to get the different husbando routes
The first two choices define the route.
thought so
Played the vn, I must say that it does well indeed have a good writing! I was hoping for David's route though :( ... Nonetheless it is amazing overall.
Also I heard that this is a rework of your old vn. Is there any option for me to try or download the old patches? Would appreciate if anyone would tell me.
HISSSSS!! OCO *burning them*
noooo ;-;
So I finished my first play-through yesterday. It was fun but I didn't get much of an ending. I didn't even see two of the backgrounds from the images on this page. I'm looking forward to trying some different paths next time!
.3.a did ya even tried every path in the FIRST decision? o3o
No! I didn't think it would be significant lol :P
I wanted David. Or maybe meet El Tigre? That should be bonus content.
HISSS!! OCO *sprays and runs*
]:3
Hello, I'm new here and I'm using an Android, but there are 3 versions you can download? Which one should I choose to download?
Try the universal one .w./ the last one on the list.
Yo! Found a spelling error. When in the place where you eat with Tom, Jayce starts speaking about his childhood hero, he mentions:
"He only does it to >>>villians<<<"
Welp, time for my cheeks to be hurting from constant smiling. :3
just finished all the content the game has to (currently) give and my god coming from playing 2 VNs with heavy topics this is a nice change of pace!! the goofiness of this VN is very funny and I cannot wait for more!
Over all rn nthe game is amazing the sprites are well desgined and havemt come across spelling errors and the game doesnt have issues with anything
I cat wait too see more from this game
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=GwPAyxXVBio and 👇have the same energy
Is that normal....?
Android: 10
I really don't know ;3;/ I gave all the versions renpy spit out!
QwQ i tryed them all.. they dont work.
same, the only thing I haven't tried yet is using JoiPlay to play the windows version on my phone 🤔
dont worn for me too.
I'm starting the game from scratch, and I'm going through Maccon's route again and honestly came to see if there was any announcement of David getting a route. You're spending so much time with him now!
I know multiple people have requested it and I liked someone's suggestion of him having a birthday shortly after starting college so he'd be legal.
Aside from John, he's honestly my favorite character... while Maccon's my least favorite.
so, no update this 25th, yeah? it'd be super understandable
where have you been tomy?
So Frickin Sad😭 it was working an hour ago now I can't even play no more. Is this only happening to android users
I'm sorry but this HAS to be an emotional on discord😂
None of the three works on my phone T^T I am now sad
Am Gonna cry Cuz all three of them didn't worked for me
I thought my device was faulty when I install and open this version of Socially Awkward.
I install both universal version and v8a-arm64 version but both show black screen.
My device is Oppo A12e, Snapdragon 450, 3 GB RAM + 64 GB storage, Android 8.1
I-im speech less after finishing the new update . Thank you monchi❤❤
Monchi......... OMG I LOVE HIM EVEN MORE THANK YOU
If it's not much to ask, please tell me which version of Android works with you guys .w./ So that I can tally and see which one actually works for everyone.
none of the three *cries in corner*
Us poor Android users *cri*
can't working
Is it possible to color-code the android downloads to know which is the new one? Its rather annoying having to download the apk and install it just to see the "Can't Install" logo because its the wrong apk >3<
They're all new ;3;/ the problem is that some people can't get it to work on some versions!
May I ask why there are 3 android Downloader?
There's so many people having trouble with each version /;w;\
Ooohhhh okay, thanks for the answer
I'm glad we finally know Jayce's height in comparison to other characters.
does the sport you pick matter to the intended route
I have tried both versions 10 times(redownload) and I always get black screen of death after launch on Android. I spent 10 hours trying to get it to load and it hasn't worked so figure I should report it.
6w6 I hate android... =3=a only suggestion I can make (Since I can only depend on Renpy's compiler) is to download the PC version and download and use Joi player in the playstore.
I know of that work around but the only issue is that I will have to reinstall rather than update so saves won't work between versions.
6w6a sorry.
Tom + Jayce forever! Cutest couple.
Finally a new update
I played this VN months ago, and I decided to come back to this now to see its progress. I was really surprised at how there was a complete rewrite of the entire story, and not to mention there was barely any progress from where I left.
Okay, um... you're going to barely progress this way (mostly as a writer) if you keep on doing this.
I'd like to say that the VN is kind of 90% dialogue and 10% narration to me. (Whether this is good or bad, I don't know. This is a visual novel, and so, the art, images, and sfx already satisfy the reader when they read.)
To me, the narration or writing style felt more plot-driven or straight-forward. Of course, I still found the flowery language that's present.
Jayce's childish and goofy nature is really evident throughout the entire story. Maccon's character gives off 'big daddy' vibes (asides from the external looks). John is the naughty kind of boy while David has the enigmatic, quiet troublemaker trope I guess. As for Tom, eh, he's more of a friendly brother, I guess?
Personally, there were scenes that I found quite boring or slow, not much going on and kind of meh.
I've yet to go to the other routes, so I don't really have all that much to say.
Overall, I don't hate it. The best advice I have to say is, to literally just keep on going. Don't rewrite again unless you're finished or you have something that fundamentally changes the story. It can be bothersome to the readers, but hey, it's your story.
okay so i just starting the new update and i got to say, you should TOTALLY add that "why are you running" meme audio to the game, not only is it a missed opportunity if there is a visual novel it fits so well with in terms of goofiness its this one X3
This update was amazing! I loved the ending so much :3
Huh by the way the updates went I thought John was next.
Ok i have some problems with the android build. It starts up normally with the renpy logo but then the game doesnt start. I managed to get it to work once but most of the time after the renpy logo it will just be a black screen. No idea what could be the problem.
Did you try the other version? .3./There are two since some people can't start with the other, unfortunately.
I tried both but for both the same outcome. And I tried it several times and only got it to work twice. I dunno what i did differently to open the game normally those two times, it seems random if it decides to work or not. And if i close the app after it just worked it will not work again after.
Hmm 6w6a I dunno what to do.
Well it seems I'm the only one with that problem, so thats good. Also I played through the Tom update so I wont open the game until the next update again. So I just hope the next updates android version won't have that problem. Maybe it was just a one time fluke. Take your time with the next update nwn!
Tom is so, so sweet ;w; I love him so much~
A game to truly describe my life
Emotional gay nervous wreck
Aren't we all? lol
touché
when I saw this game I could not wait to see what happens next and I ship Mac and jay all the way! and him with Rask and Tom I how to see the next update be bigger than the last! but I can wait to so don't worry I won't rush you.
I find this vn too relatable personally to give proper criticism. What I will say is take your time with it(with the sick-neck-thing) and make sure your heart is in it. Love this vn and find the art and animation beautiful.
I will try to find some healthy criticism to give, but that'll have to wait until future updates or I play it enough times. Either way, keep up the great work! :)
i don't think a vn has ever made me laugh more then this one did !
I Love every single character their interactions with eachother the Humour the animations,Jayce's Expression sprites the writing, just woah @o@ .
I hope you get better Monchi just know that a lot of people here support you !
lots of love <333
I love how the characters act to different things, also when Jayce needs to eat, and just goes OMNOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMOM like crazy, no fucks or anything
t'was my first time going down maccon's route