HELLO! I made an account solely to give you a boost in comments and engagement for this wonderful piece of art!! Probably my favorite VN in quite a long while. I know I do not offer much with just mere words ($$$$$) but know that I greatly appreciate the amazing work you did (and are doing) here!
It's soooo rare to see animated sprites in visual novels, and I can tell the amount of love and effort you put into this project. I really really want to praise this more. I love how you set up the whole story and setting (which is pretty different for the whole furry VN genre), and it's honestly entertaining for me to watch things unfold, despite me not being able to wholly relate to the extent of Jayce's social awkwardness. I looove it!
The dialogue feels fluid, heck you even make the "text dialogue" keep their flair in their supposedly digital form. The intro music is a soothing piece for my feelings. Aaaahhhhhhhh~~~~~~~
Hey monchimutt, I have a question, I wanna know what song you used for the title screen, I tried all the songs that the credits gave but I didn't hear it, might have missed one, but please tell me as I'd love to know
So this may be a slow body question, but if he’s not a student, what is he now? I dunno if it was mentioned at all, but I thought it was weird how he was just at the school all the time :( plz help
Maccon is now a Gym Owner. Well in the old version he was already Gym Owner but still going to school. He came to the school to visit or bring his brother to school when he bump into Jayce (MC) in the courtyard…
Oh I see...thank you for the clarification! I originally thought he was one of those creepy stalking brothers since he always encountered me, but now I see that’s most definitely not true lmao
The Maccon update is really great,and then the idea of putting a younger brother was an interesting gimmick,I hope the next update is back for Maccon.Take me a curiosity. Isn't it by any coincidence that there was something between Tom and Maccon in the past?or maybe it's me that I'm imagining?
wow, I don't think I've ever related more to the protagonist in a VN before, gj Monchi, can't wait for the characters and world you've created to be expanded upon!
From the moment I played Socially Awkward, I knew you were a Filipino! There were some (if not, a lot. Sorry, I played it a while ago and forgot 😅😅😅) Filipino like habits and characteristics from the main character. It was rather a speculation than a solid fact for me then, but when I saw your Twitter, I kept on yelling, "Sabi ko na nga baaaaa!" (I knew it!) that I'm worried I woke my whole family up haha.
Anyway, I loved your vn! You made me fall in love with the characters, especially Jayce and Tom. Your story was awesome (and made me cry buckets) and I'm looking forward to playing more in the future. I'm hooked on Tom and how he's so wholesome (unlike his brother 😆). I wouldn't mind meeting a guy like him someday 🥴.
Thank you and keep up the good work!
P.S. Salamat sa pagpapaiyak mo sa akin sa napaka-gandang istorya. Wag ka rin magpagod, at matuto kang magpahinga at i-treat ang sarili mo paminsan-minsan. Luv u for your work! Susubaybayan ko siya hehe. Kudos! UwU
Wait, do you have trouble speaking in Tagalog? Were you raised outside of the country? Just in case, I'll transate it for you-
"PS: Thank you for making me cry with this very beautiful story. Also, please don't tire yourself out, try to rest and treat yourself from time to time. Luv u for your work! I'll be keeping a close eye on this game hehe. Kudos! UwU"
Thank you, Haidaaaa! I was supposedly gonna say "Proud to be 🇵🇭" but decided it would be a little cringey because the phrase has been abused too much by fellow Filipinos and ONLY when some foreign half-half carried our nationality. But yeah, thanks haha.
(No offense to half-Filipino people. You guys are great in my book.)
No problem, Ycarus! Also, that is soooo true! The fact that that exact line has been overused by others has made it sound sorta cringey and annoying. Especially about it being usually said when a foreigner who's half-Filipino becomes popular or is given recognition outside of the Philippines. No hate towards half-Filipinos though, they're cool, it's just the phrase that's annoying!
It's okay! Haha. Pero yeah, that's the exact reason. They only own their right to being a Filipino when some random half-Filipino (and even full Filipino people, no hate to both) becomes prestigious in a foreign country. I mean, own it people even if they did something wrong. You should be proud to be a Filipino and at times accept it if we make mistakes. No nationality/culture is perfect. It's okay to feel ashamed sometimes.
(Yung sinabi niya na, "What's the point of buying a little portable fan when I can have a bigger fan without spending any money," naka-relate ko dun hahahaha.)
Your internet connection's most likely super slow, it did the same thing when I was downloading Tennis Ace's update. I switched to a better connection and it worked.
Im gonna miss Mac's flirting at the end of day one but hey i have the old build saved and a scene like that will probably exist in the future.Overall great update i was looking forward to Maccon's rework the most(cause i like big kind wolves),Davids introduction was fun and i can't wait to see him talk more.I just hope we don't shatter poor Tom's heart too much his route rework made me actively like the concept of a relationship between him and Jayce.
Honestly, John's attitude now compared to the beginning is kinda rude 😂 I'm not saying you did anything wrong, just saying John is... Extra? Idk, I'll stop talking now before someone thinks I'm being rude 😂
Great update! Was surprised by the change in Maccon's role in the story but the new role you gave him was actually really good. His new introduction when he was calming Jayce down showed more of his personality compared to his original introduction, in which we didn't really get to see his personality as well as the new one does. All in all, the new direction you've given to Maccon's route is really good!
Adding David to the cast was nice! His personality blends well with the rest of the cast. Also, him taking Maccon's original spot in the class was a pretty solid choice. David DOES look pretty young, assuming he is around 18 years old and compared to the rest of the cast but, contrary to popular opinion, I think it still fits. Some people just look younger than they actually are and David might just be one of them. Though, I'm not against a redo of his sprite, I'm just giving my opinion on the matter, haha! But if I were to choose, I'd keep the "young" look to him, haha. Either way, both the current sprite and, if you decide to, an older looking sprite will fit just as nice.
Loved the update! I'm already excited thinking about the next one!
But I do have one insy teensy tiny question... can David be added as a playable route? owo The way that Jayce and David interacted at the gates of the school was really cute and I can really see them working well as an extremely cute couple! owo
Thanks for all the time you put into this, Monchimutt! You're truly amazing!
Just wanted to say this is one of my favorite visual novels I've played.
I am a bit sad big mac isnt gonna be a student anymore, but i know you'll work him into the story perfectly, plus David is a hella interesting character
Is it just me or is David gonna get a route, cause it certainly feels like it. I wouldn't be against it, I'd be thrilled if he does become a playable route. I loved the interactions with David and his design is great. He looks young, but some people do look like that when their 18. I also like that he wears an oversized collar, it suits him perfectly. I really look forward to seeing more of him and learning more about him. Monchi, if you give David a route, you would be a godsend. Well, you already are because I love this VN.
I have to say it ... I REALLY IMPRESSED THIS UPDATE !!! :O , I mean that maccon is no longer a student, it is a great change because I think it will give more flexibility to his own route, but I think I will miss him :,( , but something that I loved was the brother of Maccon, David seems very tender, it's like a little creature that acts as bad but I can't seem to harm a fly (despite the fact that he stole jayce's wallet :v), my favorite part was when john started chasing david while tom and maccon was chatting, that really made me laugh (also that what maccon says about tom's last name makes me think that is true that he is not john's biological brother), for me this update left me eager to see the second day of maccon,I'm curious to see what happens ......
pt: it really doesn't matter so much I have to wait, your work is of such quality that it's worth >:v
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will the update be tomorrow owo?
HELLO! I made an account solely to give you a boost in comments and engagement for this wonderful piece of art!! Probably my favorite VN in quite a long while. I know I do not offer much with just mere words ($$$$$) but know that I greatly appreciate the amazing work you did (and are doing) here!
It's soooo rare to see animated sprites in visual novels, and I can tell the amount of love and effort you put into this project. I really really want to praise this more. I love how you set up the whole story and setting (which is pretty different for the whole furry VN genre), and it's honestly entertaining for me to watch things unfold, despite me not being able to wholly relate to the extent of Jayce's social awkwardness. I looove it!
The dialogue feels fluid, heck you even make the "text dialogue" keep their flair in their supposedly digital form. The intro music is a soothing piece for my feelings. Aaaahhhhhhhh~~~~~~~
Hey monchimutt, may i ask a question, it says that it updates every 25th of the month but may i ask, in what timezone exactly?
I think in the Philippines’ Timezone…
Okay Thanks for the info :)
Hey monchimutt, I have a question, I wanna know what song you used for the title screen, I tried all the songs that the credits gave but I didn't hear it, might have missed one, but please tell me as I'd love to know
Oh it's custom made .3.a so it has no name and the musician is in hiding o3o lol~ :V
Oh- Well that's disappointing, I guess I just have to keep the title screen open if I wanna hear it XD
https://www.mediafire.com/file/pws0vno48yi3cf5/everlasting.mp3/file
*throws*
you're welcome :p
:DDD Thank you so god dam much!
Can we date David? ✨ U W U ✨
I wish so too. But it is unlikely since his brother is already dateable.
well, Tom and John are bros. also, yes, I know I'm late, only just discovered this VN today.
So this may be a slow body question, but if he’s not a student, what is he now? I dunno if it was mentioned at all, but I thought it was weird how he was just at the school all the time :( plz help
Maccon is now a Gym Owner. Well in the old version he was already Gym Owner but still going to school. He came to the school to visit or bring his brother to school when he bump into Jayce (MC) in the courtyard…
Oh I see...thank you for the clarification! I originally thought he was one of those creepy stalking brothers since he always encountered me, but now I see that’s most definitely not true lmao
I have a really big question, since the art is so beautiful and the updates are very punctual, I wonder if the art is made by you or someone else?
Sprites = Me \ .3./
Backgrounds = Google + Filters \ .3./ lol
Credits to the google man who can almost lead a robot uprising but is often stopped by grandmas thanking him for the service..
Android version 4.4.2
You... need an upgrade, bad. Renpy only supports 5 above.
Now Im wondering if you can date Maccon’s brother…
Nods in agreement*
The Maccon update is really great,and then the idea of putting a younger brother was an interesting gimmick,I hope the next update is back for Maccon.Take me a curiosity. Isn't it by any coincidence that there was something between Tom and Maccon in the past?or maybe it's me that I'm imagining?
It said Updated 22 Hours ago, What did Monchi just Update?
Hmm, deleted comment? Must be a secret
wow, I don't think I've ever related more to the protagonist in a VN before, gj Monchi, can't wait for the characters and world you've created to be expanded upon!
Sees Maccon's brother David: O_O *falls in love* 😏😏
My other self: OMG HE'S SO HANDSOME LIKE HIS BROTHER
Voices in the back of my head: do you want to make it threesome
Me: O_O really!?!
Voices 2: if the author doesn't make it then you can make a fanart; them having a threesome
Me: MUAHHAHAUAHUAHUAUAH
It is kinda weird since the two are brothers. But I guess you have your own opinions.
OMGG This game is so good, I loveeeee the animation, the detail in the Main menu when u done the demo, and Mac, love your game <3
Amazing novel and the animations of the characters are Amazing and funny too! 👏🏼👏🏼
I know I've said too much on the comments section already haha, but is John an available love interest?
He made my heart warm and fuzzy inside.
>.<
And sorry for y'all who peg them as bros.
.3. you got to ignore the other brother O3O
Yeah, that's what I meant haha. I thought I was going down the Rask route. So is John's Route only available if I ignore Tom and Rask?
Thank you so much, btw ☺️
And yeah, pretty hard to ignore him. I love them both too much >3<
Oh, yeah. Nevermind. I just saw that the Rask route is a different choice. Well, carry on. Sorry for the trouble, author-san. ☺️
Vengo a decir que me siento con suerte de conocer todo esto en etapas tempranas de desarrollo, amor pa todos <3
I love Mac. I do. But...
Will David be datable?
Also is this game going to work on iPhone?
Nope .3. sorry, Renpy doesn't even have a distribution button for Iphone's. Blame your God .3.9 for he has a strict hold on Iphone O.S
When I tried the apk I started it and it said something about libpng 16 I think? Why is it not working.
I'm not suuuuuure .w.a what android version is it?
Android version 4.4.2
Oh jesus! Renpy doesn't support Android 5 below. Oo
You need a big affordable upgrade. You're 5 years late! XD
I can try it on my tablet instead of my old one. Hopefully
I'll never get enough of this game~ uwu
Can't wait for the next update, nyaw~ >w<
WHAAAAAAAAAAH!!!
From the moment I played Socially Awkward, I knew you were a Filipino! There were some (if not, a lot. Sorry, I played it a while ago and forgot 😅😅😅) Filipino like habits and characteristics from the main character. It was rather a speculation than a solid fact for me then, but when I saw your Twitter, I kept on yelling, "Sabi ko na nga baaaaa!" (I knew it!) that I'm worried I woke my whole family up haha.
Anyway, I loved your vn! You made me fall in love with the characters, especially Jayce and Tom. Your story was awesome (and made me cry buckets) and I'm looking forward to playing more in the future. I'm hooked on Tom and how he's so wholesome (unlike his brother 😆). I wouldn't mind meeting a guy like him someday 🥴.
Thank you and keep up the good work!
P.S. Salamat sa pagpapaiyak mo sa akin sa napaka-gandang istorya. Wag ka rin magpagod, at matuto kang magpahinga at i-treat ang sarili mo paminsan-minsan. Luv u for your work! Susubaybayan ko siya hehe. Kudos! UwU
6w6 *already lost in translation on the P.S. part and getting PTSD flash backs of my Filipino classess of getting 3/50 on my exams* TTCTT WAH!!
Wait, do you have trouble speaking in Tagalog? Were you raised outside of the country? Just in case, I'll transate it for you-
"PS: Thank you for making me cry with this very beautiful story. Also, please don't tire yourself out, try to rest and treat yourself from time to time. Luv u for your work! I'll be keeping a close eye on this game hehe. Kudos! UwU"
(Also, I'm Filipino as well!)
I was raised... by the internet o3o
Also chinese schools, chinese schools ruined my childhood.
Sounds really familiar hahaha. A lot of my classmates are, too. But yeah, keep up the good work, bruh. Rooting for you! ☺️☺️☺️
Sorry for not considering whether there's a language barrier huhu. Looking forward to more of your work 😉
Saaaaame
Ahhhh, that explains it. No worries, you'll get better at the language soon! Just gotta practice!
Thank you, Haidaaaa! I was supposedly gonna say "Proud to be 🇵🇭" but decided it would be a little cringey because the phrase has been abused too much by fellow Filipinos and ONLY when some foreign half-half carried our nationality. But yeah, thanks haha.
(No offense to half-Filipino people. You guys are great in my book.)
No problem, Ycarus! Also, that is soooo true! The fact that that exact line has been overused by others has made it sound sorta cringey and annoying. Especially about it being usually said when a foreigner who's half-Filipino becomes popular or is given recognition outside of the Philippines. No hate towards half-Filipinos though, they're cool, it's just the phrase that's annoying!
(Also, sorry for the late reply!)
It's okay! Haha. Pero yeah, that's the exact reason. They only own their right to being a Filipino when some random half-Filipino (and even full Filipino people, no hate to both) becomes prestigious in a foreign country. I mean, own it people even if they did something wrong. You should be proud to be a Filipino and at times accept it if we make mistakes. No nationality/culture is perfect. It's okay to feel ashamed sometimes.
(Idk if you can relate to my ranting ass haha)
I actually suspected he was Filipino becuz of the habits of the characters in the story
(pinoy din po ako :P)
Same, bro. Same.
(Yung sinabi niya na, "What's the point of buying a little portable fan when I can have a bigger fan without spending any money," naka-relate ko dun hahahaha.)
im just in the intro and i already love it? I asndflhasbflasnsfijasnfja XD
THIS GAME IS SO GOOD OMG PERFECTION
Will there be a continuation of the storyline ? Is a very good storyline hope you guys will continue to update .
Why does it won't download its say forbidden? Can you guys help me pls
Your internet connection's most likely super slow, it did the same thing when I was downloading Tennis Ace's update. I switched to a better connection and it worked.
Thanks i'll try that
Im gonna miss Mac's flirting at the end of day one but hey i have the old build saved and a scene like that will probably exist in the future.Overall great update i was looking forward to Maccon's rework the most(cause i like big kind wolves),Davids introduction was fun and i can't wait to see him talk more.I just hope we don't shatter poor Tom's heart too much his route rework made me actively like the concept of a relationship between him and Jayce.
Soooooo, Monchi~ is David gonna have a route? because... that would be awesome~
As tempting as the idea is the dude is running a one man show with 4 routes so idk i'd hold off on it.
Honestly, John's attitude now compared to the beginning is kinda rude 😂 I'm not saying you did anything wrong, just saying John is... Extra? Idk, I'll stop talking now before someone thinks I'm being rude 😂
Great update! Was surprised by the change in Maccon's role in the story but the new role you gave him was actually really good. His new introduction when he was calming Jayce down showed more of his personality compared to his original introduction, in which we didn't really get to see his personality as well as the new one does. All in all, the new direction you've given to Maccon's route is really good!
Adding David to the cast was nice! His personality blends well with the rest of the cast. Also, him taking Maccon's original spot in the class was a pretty solid choice. David DOES look pretty young, assuming he is around 18 years old and compared to the rest of the cast but, contrary to popular opinion, I think it still fits. Some people just look younger than they actually are and David might just be one of them. Though, I'm not against a redo of his sprite, I'm just giving my opinion on the matter, haha! But if I were to choose, I'd keep the "young" look to him, haha. Either way, both the current sprite and, if you decide to, an older looking sprite will fit just as nice.
Loved the update! I'm already excited thinking about the next one!
But I do have one insy teensy tiny question... can David be added as a playable route? owo The way that Jayce and David interacted at the gates of the school was really cute and I can really see them working well as an extremely cute couple! owo
Thanks for all the time you put into this, Monchimutt! You're truly amazing!
please don't tell that in mac's route... we have to breaks tom's little heart :(
Tch, i know. I love them both already and rejecting Tom would hurt me haha
Yeah while i was playing through the route this is what i was thinking:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P8K3W1wPXeA
Just wanted to say this is one of my favorite visual novels I've played.
I am a bit sad big mac isnt gonna be a student anymore, but i know you'll work him into the story perfectly, plus David is a hella interesting character
Is it just me or is David gonna get a route, cause it certainly feels like it. I wouldn't be against it, I'd be thrilled if he does become a playable route. I loved the interactions with David and his design is great. He looks young, but some people do look like that when their 18. I also like that he wears an oversized collar, it suits him perfectly. I really look forward to seeing more of him and learning more about him. Monchi, if you give David a route, you would be a godsend. Well, you already are because I love this VN.
TMW YOU CANT FIGURE OUT HOW TO GET MAC'S ROUTE AHHHH
EDIT: I FIGURED IT OUT I THINK IM JUST STUPID
EDIT AGAIN: NO I DID NOT FIGURE IT OUT GAHHHH
EDIT A-FUCKING-GAIN: I THINK I BOOTED UP THE WRONG VERSION LMAO
Yea i booted up the wrong version. Sorry y'alls lmfao
Is it just me or is Tom in love with Jayce? (the MC)
I have to say it ... I REALLY IMPRESSED THIS UPDATE !!! :O , I mean that maccon is no longer a student, it is a great change because I think it will give more flexibility to his own route, but I think I will miss him :,( , but something that I loved was the brother of Maccon, David seems very tender, it's like a little creature that acts as bad but I can't seem to harm a fly (despite the fact that he stole jayce's wallet :v), my favorite part was when john started chasing david while tom and maccon was chatting, that really made me laugh (also that what maccon says about tom's last name makes me think that is true that he is not john's biological brother), for me this update left me eager to see the second day of maccon,I'm curious to see what happens ......
pt: it really doesn't matter so much I have to wait, your work is of such quality that it's worth >:v