in theory, yes, since according to the author the update that is coming is his, because he is rewriting all the routes (also the very nice one, I don't think he will delete it :3)
Hello. I've been following you for a while since you have started this and all I can say is that I enjoyed very much the visual novel. The sense of humor and the socially awkward theme captures it very well, along with funny facial expressions on the protagonist and the main characters that gives a lot of enjoyment and enhances the reading experience. You really now how to keep comedy and drama on the same boat. :D
Hello monchimutt idk if its just me but sometimes for most of renpy vn that i play when the keyboard pop up the screen will stuck at the top like this, it's doesn't happening if the keyboard don't make the screen goes upward though, well i think renpy had a problem with keyboard thing, since there's 2 problem with keyboard that i found while play vn that's use renpy, first is what i explained before and the second is if the screen doesn't go upward for some vn the word will disappear after you click the enter button so be careful with that. And I play version 0.11 btw, i found that if you clik the home button and open this vn again it will back to normal so there's nothing serious here but it's just little annoying, but i love yours story so far so keep it up, and be safe, healthy, and happy because we need you write this vn to the end lol.
for my phone it will drag the screen text box upward so i still can see what i write but usually it's will came down again afterwards, but for the vn from renpy sometimes it will stuck like that, but yeah it's maybe just compatibility issues, it's not a big problem though since i can fix it with just click home button and open it again or just use safe files, but it's may be a little annoying if there is more thing to write in the game for the next update lol, but afterall i still love your vn though so don't worry about it.
Although Monchimutt did say he isn't Filipino. He just hates the Filipino language because it is hard. Maybe he is a foreigner who moved here recently.
This is a fantastic VN. All the characters feel so alive and I love every expression in this game. I can't wait to see more of this VN in the future! It will absolutely be worth the wait. Also I loved the messages you put at the end of the current build. It was hilarious :3.
i feel like this vn is gonna surpass every furry vn out there lol.
so much depth to the characters especially mc (introverts make the best mc imo with those inner thoughts xd). what i like the game the most is the replayability with different choices that don't affect the story routes while doing so, players can really understand characters even more, an example is the first choice where you can choose to go left/right, by going left and then going back, you can really experience with mc's antisocial perspective and thoughts. and ofc the replayability for routes branching right from the start while also being able to reroute from other branches (ignore rask's text -> tom's route) in the middle of the story.
animated sprites express their personalities very well, love those sound effects. not to mention art style and the sprites various expressions are really top notch
really good ost that fits the atmosphere perfectly
i thought tom was a cold person in the beginning of my playthrough as mc didnt like him and tried to avoid him, bcos i chose rask's route at the start, who would've thought his character and relationship with mc would be so deep, i was surprised ngl.
game alr feels like a finished game besides the unfinished writings. was impressed. cant wait for tom's route! keep up the good work
This VN is the most wonderful and unforgettable thing i ever seen!
Oh my God! OH MY GOD!
ANIMATED CHARACTERS, PERFECT CONVERSATIONS AND F*CKING AMAZING ATMOSPHERE!!!
Just... Kill me, if i am not right. There's no more any VNs like this one. All dialogues are full of meaning and information, characters are full of life. They are really like... Alive?... They have all kinds of emotions and feelings...
I have nothing more to say. It is f*ckin' brilliant. Even if it is only a beta version, just a beginning of a story - it is brilliant.
Thanks to the author of this masterpiece novel.
You're the best <3
P.S ( Sorry, if i made some grammatical or lexical mistakes, English is not my native language :c )
how could i meet maccon?. guess thats his name. damn.... haha when jayce drooled i drooled too. huge... look at that body. and the teacher is hot too uwu
I have become attached to this VN Because I myself have the same experience as the mc Jayce (except moving and college) so I understand the feeling of being socially akward, But I guess I have it harder cuz my Best friend just moved away qwq. Anyway, I just wanted to say how much I LOVE this visual novel ^^
So, yeah... I LOVE YOUR VN! I could see the dedication you've put into designing each character, and even the change in their face design FOR EVERY DIALOGUE! I really love the story and had a hard time fighting back tears on the Tom backstory. I've inevitably fallen in love with him (and you uwu).
You truly deserve recognition for your work! Kudos! Looking forward to your next updates! 😊😊😊
dude, this is the full game for now, it gets updated every month on the 25th as far as I know. also, literally the second sentence in the VN is ''This VN is still in development"
these is something I found replaying the rask route and it has me very confused, in the last update, in the memory that jayce has about how he met tom, he tells him that his full name is tom sarabi, but when john is introduced to rask on his own and rask's route, he says that his full name is john nully and as far as i understand jhon and tom are brothers ... shouldn't they have the same last name?, is it a mistake that the creator inadvertently made or is it something important and really john and tom are brothers but not related by blood? (also if I'm wrong correct me)
the other routes that exist are rask,tom, john's and soon maccon's and it depends on what you do at the beginning, to do john's you simply have to agree to change your seat when he asks you and for tom's you have to refuse it, and for rask's it is go left when you get to campus and then come back (however this could change a bit when the maccon route appears)
This is adorable, all the routes are so well done! John is a complete doofus and I love that about him, Tom is so genuine and sweet, Rask is such a fish out of water, and Jayce is hilarious to boot!
Tom's route has explored the root of Jayce's anxiety somewhat I feel, and it is very, very relatable. The writing on this is extremely enjoyable, able to address such a serious issue and still be funny when it needs to be.
Can't wait for Mac's redone route if the others' quality is anything to go by!
OOOOH MYY GOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!, the Little Jayce and Tom are so cute, I really loved that part of the update, also the protagonist's birthday theme put me on the verge of tears, and I really like the new sound effects and the character spirts, I would say that justifies that it is not the whole day ... but what leaves me more doubts is how the updates continue, the following will be the new route of maccon? and will they follow that order until it reach john's route? It is a complete mystery, but it really makes me look forward to the following, splendid work continues like this: 3
Wow! I wish my university had a bakery on campus ;_;
Jayce's animated sprites in this update are AMAZING! I just about died when he did the sparkle eyes. so cute c:
I really like how you completely reworked Tom's character, it all fits together really nicely. also im gonna say it again the lil animations when they eat are 10/10. cronch.
Good update, it didn't feel as short as you said. The writing improved a lot so good job, it's definitely not perfect not you're getting there so keep trying to improve it more.
On a side note, stupid thought but it would be funny to add some sound effects to Jayce's more animated expression like the anime eyes can have a ""WOAHHHH"" sound effect and that gnome rainbow barfing thing can just have Sprinkle sounds ( yeah I saw it on your Twitter, and stop it with the thrist you're being too thirsty )
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Omg, can't wait for the update tomorrow
11 minutes ago lmao
Same :]
When is the next update of this game im so excited
the Updates are every 25th of the month.
Are we going to have more Maccon content in the form of a route soon?
in theory, yes, since according to the author the update that is coming is his, because he is rewriting all the routes (also the very nice one, I don't think he will delete it :3)
Hello. I've been following you for a while since you have started this and all I can say is that I enjoyed very much the visual novel. The sense of humor and the socially awkward theme captures it very well, along with funny facial expressions on the protagonist and the main characters that gives a lot of enjoyment and enhances the reading experience. You really now how to keep comedy and drama on the same boat. :D
Just a simple opinion on your animations...
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THEY ARE CUTE, AMAZING AND BEAUTIFUL ★∆★
Hello monchimutt idk if its just me but sometimes for most of renpy vn that i play when the keyboard pop up the screen will stuck at the top like this,
it's doesn't happening if the keyboard don't make the screen goes upward though, well i think renpy had a problem with keyboard thing, since there's 2 problem with keyboard that i found while play vn that's use renpy, first is what i explained before and the second is if the screen doesn't go upward for some vn the word will disappear after you click the enter button so be careful with that. And I play version 0.11 btw, i found that if you clik the home button and open this vn again it will back to normal so there's nothing serious here but it's just little annoying, but i love yours story so far so keep it up, and be safe, healthy, and happy because we need you write this vn to the end lol.
I... don't know how to fix that XDa What version of android does your phone/tablet have?
android 10 btw, maybe that's exactly why i got this kind of bug very often, since the renpy not updated to user who have android 10?.
Maybe @w@ sorry but I think this is a compatability issue, and shouldn't your keyboard goes into "Pop up" mode? .3.a
for my phone it will drag the screen text box upward so i still can see what i write but usually it's will came down again afterwards, but for the vn from renpy sometimes it will stuck like that, but yeah it's maybe just compatibility issues, it's not a big problem though since i can fix it with just click home button and open it again or just use safe files, but it's may be a little annoying if there is more thing to write in the game for the next update lol, but afterall i still love your vn though so don't worry about it.
Lmao Monchimutt is so quirky even in itch.io that he doesn't even have his own profile pic unlike the others. Cute.
UWU i can't wait i want to time travel to july 25th just to see maccon update *laugh and choke intensifies*
When did I ever say that? 9w9
Are you from philippines? Because the ayala gave it away. Hehe
MU-MUAHAHA!! MUAHAHAH!!!! \ OAO/ *laugh maniacly*
Lmao
I knew rhe game was giving off too much filipino vibes, not to mention the stool- haha
Although Monchimutt did say he isn't Filipino. He just hates the Filipino language because it is hard. Maybe he is a foreigner who moved here recently.
ohohoho~ 👀
This is a fantastic VN. All the characters feel so alive and I love every expression in this game. I can't wait to see more of this VN in the future! It will absolutely be worth the wait. Also I loved the messages you put at the end of the current build. It was hilarious :3.
i feel like this vn is gonna surpass every furry vn out there lol.
so much depth to the characters especially mc (introverts make the best mc imo with those inner thoughts xd). what i like the game the most is the replayability with different choices that don't affect the story routes while doing so, players can really understand characters even more, an example is the first choice where you can choose to go left/right, by going left and then going back, you can really experience with mc's antisocial perspective and thoughts. and ofc the replayability for routes branching right from the start while also being able to reroute from other branches (ignore rask's text -> tom's route) in the middle of the story.
animated sprites express their personalities very well, love those sound effects. not to mention art style and the sprites various expressions are really top notch
really good ost that fits the atmosphere perfectly
i thought tom was a cold person in the beginning of my playthrough as mc didnt like him and tried to avoid him, bcos i chose rask's route at the start, who would've thought his character and relationship with mc would be so deep, i was surprised ngl.
game alr feels like a finished game besides the unfinished writings. was impressed. cant wait for tom's route! keep up the good work
Why are you all so excited with Tom's route?
I really liked Rask :p
This VN is the most wonderful and unforgettable thing i ever seen!
Oh my God! OH MY GOD!
ANIMATED CHARACTERS, PERFECT CONVERSATIONS AND F*CKING AMAZING ATMOSPHERE!!!
Just... Kill me, if i am not right. There's no more any VNs like this one. All dialogues are full of meaning and information, characters are full of life. They are really like... Alive?... They have all kinds of emotions and feelings...
I have nothing more to say. It is f*ckin' brilliant. Even if it is only a beta version, just a beginning of a story - it is brilliant.
Thanks to the author of this masterpiece novel.
You're the best <3
P.S ( Sorry, if i made some grammatical or lexical mistakes, English is not my native language :c )
how could i meet maccon?. guess thats his name. damn.... haha when jayce drooled i drooled too. huge... look at that body. and the teacher is hot too uwu
unfortunately the route is blocked because the creator recreates all of them, but don't worry it will come out in the next update
ohh... is that so... well thanks for the info!!
I have become attached to this VN Because I myself have the same experience as the mc Jayce (except moving and college) so I understand the feeling of being socially akward, But I guess I have it harder cuz my Best friend just moved away qwq. Anyway, I just wanted to say how much I LOVE this visual novel ^^
I LOVE TOM'S ROUTE SO MUCHHHH!!!!!💓💓💓💓😍😍😍😍😍🥴🥴
How dare you make such a good VN? I can honestly say that your masterpiece stole my heart and peace.
Jayce so sweet boy. I cried with him but it's because I so similar with him in general. Others boys pretty too. Thanks you for them.
Although i hear there is Jonh's route but can't get it hmmm. Anyway i love your work (and you
NO HOMOas author).I'm so sad Tom's story is so short 😭😭😭
What's the OP song? It's very relaxing
im assuming that you were referring to the menu song, here https://www.mediafire.com/file/pws0vno48yi3cf5/everlasting.mp3/file
Lol
App Not Installed
install it then, dumb phone!
For some reason, my phone doesn't want to download it qwqq
Same TwT
Rip
When will Maccon's route come out?
in the next update (so you won't have to wait that long :3)
pt: if you don't know every update go out every 25th of the month.
So, yeah... I LOVE YOUR VN! I could see the dedication you've put into designing each character, and even the change in their face design FOR EVERY DIALOGUE! I really love the story and had a hard time fighting back tears on the Tom backstory. I've inevitably fallen in love with him (and you uwu).
You truly deserve recognition for your work! Kudos! Looking forward to your next updates! 😊😊😊
so i downloaded the game today for windows but can't play the macon route? it just says "jump on over" at the part in the auditorium. is this a bug?
Nope, Maccons route is under reconstructing .3.b so its closed for now.
ooohhh okayyyy thanks for letting me know can't wait to see moreee
Is Jayce taller than John?
Im interested too!
in the new update in rask route macoon feels like a sneakpeak from His update, but His desing Is cool i guess
Someone that knows something about the ful game or how to to play the other routes DM me in my mail pls : JoseH2489@hotmail.com or tell me here pls
can someone tell me where I can find the full game plz ! DM me in my e-mail - julioamaury10@icloud.com -thanks !
*questions your reading skills and morals* 9w9
dude, this is the full game for now, it gets updated every month on the 25th as far as I know. also, literally the second sentence in the VN is ''This VN is still in development"
these is something I found replaying the rask route and it has me very confused, in the last update, in the memory that jayce has about how he met tom, he tells him that his full name is tom sarabi, but when john is introduced to rask on his own and rask's route, he says that his full name is john nully and as far as i understand jhon and tom are brothers ... shouldn't they have the same last name?, is it a mistake that the creator inadvertently made or is it something important and really john and tom are brothers but not related by blood? (also if I'm wrong correct me)
>w> ~~~~~~ It's working~~~
soooo...is it important to the story and was it done on purpose or was it really a mistake and are you glad that the fans post it?
(*visible confusion here*)
Yup .3.b July update
What are the list of routes? Cause all I've played is Tom's and I don't seem to know how to get the others haha
the other routes that exist are rask,tom, john's and soon maccon's and it depends on what you do at the beginning, to do john's you simply have to agree to change your seat when he asks you and for tom's you have to refuse it, and for rask's it is go left when you get to campus and then come back (however this could change a bit when the maccon route appears)
This is adorable, all the routes are so well done! John is a complete doofus and I love that about him, Tom is so genuine and sweet, Rask is such a fish out of water, and Jayce is hilarious to boot!
Tom's route has explored the root of Jayce's anxiety somewhat I feel, and it is very, very relatable. The writing on this is extremely enjoyable, able to address such a serious issue and still be funny when it needs to be.
Can't wait for Mac's redone route if the others' quality is anything to go by!
OOOOH MYY GOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!, the Little Jayce and Tom are so cute, I really loved that part of the update, also the protagonist's birthday theme put me on the verge of tears, and I really like the new sound effects and the character spirts, I would say that justifies that it is not the whole day ... but what leaves me more doubts is how the updates continue, the following will be the new route of maccon? and will they follow that order until it reach john's route? It is a complete mystery, but it really makes me look forward to the following, splendid work continues like this: 3
Ngl the part with the cake when I read that it was he's birthday I started crying thx for this wonderful story keep up <3 !!
Wow! I wish my university had a bakery on campus ;_;
Jayce's animated sprites in this update are AMAZING! I just about died when he did the sparkle eyes. so cute c:
I really like how you completely reworked Tom's character, it all fits together really nicely. also im gonna say it again the lil animations when they eat are 10/10. cronch.
What a great update!
Good update, it didn't feel as short as you said. The writing improved a lot so good job, it's definitely not perfect not you're getting there so keep trying to improve it more.
On a side note, stupid thought but it would be funny to add some sound effects to Jayce's more animated expression like the anime eyes can have a ""WOAHHHH"" sound effect and that gnome rainbow barfing thing can just have Sprinkle sounds ( yeah I saw it on your Twitter, and stop it with the thrist you're being too thirsty )
Anyways uwu
Why is it saying version 10 on android?
Because android weird .C.
*updates since there were some bugs* there .3.b should be V11 9w9 if its not there then it's still uploading.